11:11

• Artist: Foxfire2009
• Description: I wrote this poem a while ago. Its about wishing on 11:11...my friend Dougie kinda inspired it hes always wishing on 11:11
• Date: 11/15/2008
• Tags: wishing wish night

Tick
Tock

Says the luminous clock
And stars shine
Like diamonds in the sky
And for a moment
Forget
The wrong things you’ve chosen

Tick
Tock

Says the luminous clock
Please believe in something
New
Bright
And Golden
And let the wish
Escape from your
Lips

Tick
Tock

Says the luminous clock
And let that
Wish
Flutter away
In to the night
Bearing your hopes
And dreams

Tick
Tock

Whispers the luminous clock
It’s 11:11
Now make your wish
Before its
Too late

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

11:11 is the name of All American Reject's song biggrin 4/5. can u read, rate, and comment on minee?

[tksunshine93]

I always wish on 11:11!!!
Good job! Great flow and the repetitiveness really adds to the over all feel of the poem.