Your Eyes are like Stars

• Artist: Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind
• Description: A poem I wrote, with bits of French in it. French just automatically makes it better, haha. Some of it may not be translated perfectly, and I couldn't.put the accents on my computer, but whatever. It's about a girl who's in love with this guy, and she just can't believe that he's actually there. Enjoy, and please comment.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: french stars love dream beautiful

Qui suis je?
Who am I?
Et qui es tu?
And who are you?

Are we one,
Or are we two?
Is this real,
Or just a dream?

Your eyes are like stars,
Et les etoules sont tres belles ce soir.
And the stars are so beautiful,
Tonight.

I can't breathe,
And I can't sleep.
I can't believe you're really real,
And not just in my head.

Francais est la langue de l'amour,
Et j'adore parle francais avec tu.
French is the language of love,
And I love speaking French with you.

Please don't go,
Stay here with me,
So that I know you're real,
And not just a dream.

Comments

[shade pain]

it speaks to the soul

[queentoottoot]

it is beautiful

[rosemidnight17]

lol your right, the french DOES make it better. the whole time i read it all i could think about was how the french made it so much more poetic. keep up the good work cus ill be watching. biggrin 5 stars.