When Darkness Falls

• Artist: Black Diamond Fox
• Description: This was the first poem I ever wrote. Not one of my better but whatever. Again; I'd love to hear your opinions so leave comments.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: darkness falls

You hear nothing but silence,
Feel nothing but pain,
This only happens,
When darkness falls.

The Grim Reaper comes,
Everything goes blank,
This always happens,
When darkness falls.

Death comes to your door,
You don't know what to do,
This is what happens,
When darkness falls.

Comments

[RyuuUmaNOChikara]

A Very Good Poem. It really grabs me with its dark yet truthful vibe.