Dear Tragedy.

• Artist: Lady Emergency
• Description: I've been looking for some feedback on this one, actually. I wrote it in a WC and really liked it, but I'm not sure how everyone else would thing. I am not to judge my own artwork, society does that for me. BUTWHATEVER. Just tell me what you think, and I'll be your best friend forever.
  Also, this is not like my normal poetry style AT ALL. I'll post some of my mother poetry tomorrroowww.
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: dear tragedy

Broken-hearted tragedy,
Sing me a lullaby,
Write me a comedy,
Dear tragedy,
Show me your secrets,
Allow me to see,
What you do.

Blood-spangled tragedy,
Paint me a picture,
Tell me of murder,
Thrill of the hunt,
Taste of the blade,
Dear tragedy,
Whisper to me,
Write me your story.

Stage-curtained tragedy,
Let me hear the love,
Allow me upon your stage,
I want to see the last curtain,
As it falls for the show,
Will you allow me,
Dear tragedy,
To see all your cast?
To walk like the stars do?

Show me,
Dear tragedies,
All that you've seen,
Paint me pictures in blood,
Sing me lullabies,
Pull the last curtain,
Will you,
Dear tragedies?

Comments

[OG-d9_6b]

loved it

[ApolloApplecore]

so emo .... i love it

[F01100001G]

Freakin' sweet!

[Just Call Me Shan]

biggrin XD loved it

[Lady Emergency]

Thank you for telling me it's in the wrong place.
I think I fixed it. Not sure, though. It says that it's in the right place on my computer.