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It rained
Today, it stormed and I wrote a few poems. Here is one.

Imperfect

I hear
the rain
pounding
down.

I feel
the rain
on my
skin.

I smell
the rain
on the
grass.

Beauty.
The rain
is so
nice.

It's cold,
and wet.
I'll be
sick.

My head's
pounding
from the
chill.

I can't
see through
my soaked
bangs.

But yet,
the rain
is just
nice.

The thunder
booms in
my ear
drums.

I shake,
my heart
races...
shock.

I see
lightning
in the
sky.

I worry
for him
though I
can't.

The rain
hurt him,
close to
me.

But I
love it.
I love
rain.

Even
the pain
it brings
me.

I love
my tears
in the
rain.

Wish it
weren't, but,
I love
pain.






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lilylacs
Community Member
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commentCommented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 04:06am
I like this poem... alot... It is very interesting and I am not good at complimenting poems but I really do like it alot!


commentCommented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 04:42am
Lol. Um, thankies! ^v^
I edited it. The beat wasn't right all the way through and still isn't... lol. It's hard to write like that. @_@



Squeaky8864
Community Member
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