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	Positive to Negative, Love to Death
	Positive to Negative, Love to Death


Positive to Negative, Love to Death By Sebrand Warren Character: Ian is a 15-year-old boy. He has black, forehead long hair and green eyes. He is deep, but normally in a good mood. He is nice and caring, but few people take notice of this. Still, he gets along well with most people and only gives his opinion if it will not start an argument. Situation: Ian had recently told the girl of his dreams he loved her. Just last night he found out that Maria, the girl of his dreams, thought she loved him as well. Today was the day of a field trip and they were overjoyed to be together knowing they loved one another. They had fallen behind on the walk to the fair and Maria ran ahead into a street. In the middle of the crosswalk she turned to call for Ian to hurry up. Just then a car passed by at what looked like in front of her. He next second the car was far down the road and the girl was laying down in the middle of the street. Unmoving and lifeless. The second in time froze and Ians thoughts became himself in his mind... (In a scared trembling voice)No- this- no… I can’t! I could have-! Why??? Is she really gone… did she- she- I… why did no one stop it! I could have saved her! (Shakes head wildly in his mind, screaming) (Pulls himself together and begins to reflect) Today started off the happiest day of my life. I just find out that the girl I love loves ME. I woke up awaiting spending my whole day with… HER. Every second felt like a dream… a fantasy. Every second… but this one… this second. Like every good dead is positive, (pauses) and when one negative comes along, (pauses again) it’s the one that turns the tables and ruins your life. What does one do when a dream becomes a nightmare? I’ve seen it in the movies, but I never knew it was real. The pain and aguish it creates. The suffering that person must go through… the suffering I’m going through. But why think of my suffering when SHE- she’s… really gone. Never to experience joy again… never to fell pain, never to accomplish her goals. Never to love… never to be LOVED again… she’s dead… and all I can think about is my pain. Everyone needs a reason to live. Before I lived to make her happy… to show her how good I was. To make other people happy so that she would be happy… but now… because of this one negative… every thing I’ve ever strived for the past… since I saw her 7 years ago… is nothing. No one else cared what I did. No one else ever gave me the will to be the was I was… for her. And now… she’s gone… and I might as well be dead too! But to let her death go uncared for other than to her parents who love her by instinct. But right this second all I want to do is sleep. Sleep for ever and escape the nightmare that is in life. Go to the dream that was life this morning and dream a dream... a fantasy. (with out another second he fainted) (just so i can edit it at home) Na!l · Wed Dec 06, 2006 @ 05:28pm · 4 Comments


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Thu Dec 07, 2006 @ 01:45am

Thats so sad........but a very good story

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Thu Dec 07, 2006 @ 02:41am

I'm deeply moved.

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Thu Dec 07, 2006 @ 02:44am

You know, you always seem to have speaches in almost all of your stories that I have read... xp xp You must be very expresive.

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Sun Dec 10, 2006 @ 04:49am

XD thanks. I like the speeches. but this is a monologue anyway so...=D

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