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the dawning of my down fall the beauty of my death
may you all frown upon me as I take my last breath
wow how long has it been since I've done this... Poetry Time
down and deep!
down and low
into somthing nobody knows.
I cant begin,
to discribe what it is.
But what I can tell you
is how it feels.
"it feels like sinking he says"
"well tell me Dani boy how so?"
Dani sighs and says
"I don't exactly know..."
But what dani neglected to mention
was... that he too felt this sickening feeling
this feeling not of lonlieness
but instead companionship the problem is
this companionship brought him down further and futher
further away from his goals
further away from what he was fighting for
"Further away from my light I sink..." said Dani boy
but his corrupt companion replied "good because darkness is all you will know."






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EriaTheWaterCharmer
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 28, 2006 @ 09:01am
*smiles*nice,i like it!


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 03, 2006 @ 10:59pm
Did you write this to show that you are lonely or that you need a companion? Here is an idea... get a dog domokun and no i will not be ur doggy idea



Bat_Boy_18
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Zero-Dantes
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 04, 2006 @ 06:48am
Quote:
that he too felt this sickening feeling
this feeling not of lonlieness
but instead companionship the problem is
this companionship brought him down further and futher
further away from his goals


did you not read this part.


commentCommented on: Mon May 21, 2007 @ 05:55am
i love poetry and this is good
hi in the sky
did i spy
a bird in the air
and i thought"i wish i was there"
see wat i mean i love poetry



the_black_death
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