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the dawning of my down fall the beauty of my death
may you all frown upon me as I take my last breath
What it means to struggle for ever
with my seed sewn and my deeds done

all this time I've spent and my battles still not won

I die inside with every blow my soul is now a bottomless hole

I lose peices of my self every day to be some one else is my fate

To think the pain within will stop just like that

You would have to be blind to the inside just like a bat

Because to see what lies in my heart you need a key

And that is a mere paice of my soul that even iludes me

So with my confession what would you lable me

The shell of a heartless man forever alone to be






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Sahara May
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 15, 2005 @ 04:09am
your peotry is beautiful. i love it.


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 03:24am
thank you I put all my feelings into it



Zero-Dantes
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EriaTheWaterCharmer
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 23, 2006 @ 10:27pm
seems alittle sad but still so beautiful Samech,i love how you really put feelings into this!


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