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These are just random crappy things that i have written or drawn. Thank you so much if you take the time to look at this!
confused okay, so yes, this is another flashback, and yes, i suck at writing them. im sorry for my suckyness...but once im done writing this all out, i will re write it and make it all flow more smoothly.

he opened his eyes slowly, his vision still blurry he realized he was not in his bathroom any longer. he was in a hospital bed. he brought his arms up to his face, and his slashes had been stitched up. "noo..."he whispered. "no!!" his whisper grew to a shout as he sat up in his bed. the door was shut, and so no one heard his shrieks and cries. he laid his head in his hands. his plan had been ruined. someone had found him. someone had brought him here...no one else was here, not his parents, not his siblings. no one. he was truly a lone. he heard the door begin to open a little, and so he hurriedly laid back down in his bed, not wanting them to know he is awake.

yes...that was pure crap...i just totally made it up...im sorry. >< this came out really fast... cry






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 12, 2010 @ 08:27pm
Are you serious, this wasn't crap at all! Don't be so hard on yourself! biggrin I actually think this is kind of thought-provoking here really, I mean, here he is, "saved," and yet....he's still alone. Like where are his parents or his siblings? If they cared so much to bring him here, then why the heck didn't they stay with him the whole time? That tells us a lot about his family, so I actually really like this part! It makes us realize why he may have been pushed so far to attempt to take his own life in the first place. So, what I'm trying to see is, I really thought this part was amazing, the way we see into his mind so clearly! XD Nice job! And sorry all my comments were a little short throughout, but I wanted to read all the entries, cause I was curious to know what was happening! I think the story is going really well, though, and I look forward to reading more of this one and the other one! You do a great job of focusing in on all the interesting stuff in the story! biggrin Sorry it took me so long to read everything, but now that finals are over, I'm online more. Please, keep posting, and I'll be back! wink Again, wonderful story!!!!!! heart


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