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These are just random crappy things that i have written or drawn. Thank you so much if you take the time to look at this!
eek okay...so this is rare, but i just randomly wrote this poem of the top of my head. lol. >///< its extremely rare for me to write a poem anymore. i first started out writing poems...and man..its been forever. lol. so yeah. i haven't fixed anything, this is exactly how it came out when i first wrote it.



i love you

more than you know

please

just let it show

i would be so happy

so full of joy

to hear you yell

of the day

you fell

in love with me.

but alas,

its just a dream

and i will have to

go back

to the world

i live in~ <3



yeah...i dont know what i was thinking about the way i placed the sentences, but thats actually how i wrote it. all weird like that. lol. confused






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 12, 2010 @ 08:19pm
WOW I LOVE IT!!!! Seriously, this was so beautiful, the rhythm, the way it flows, and the ending line "I will have to go back to the world i love in" is sooo......sublimely beautiful!!!! <3


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 11, 2013 @ 12:26am
This is SO awesome!! "i would be so happy so full of joy to hear you yell of the day you fell in love with me." is my favorite part heart



Soul_of_a_Nobody
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