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Just songs i wrote or write...just thought id show them off maybe see what people think. I'd like a reaction some are deep while others are just fun. I mean the more people i have looking at this the further i can develop as a songwriter.
Faithful
(samples Unfaithful by Rihanna)
Story of my life,
Searching for the one,
But he keeps avoiding me,
Sorrow of my soul,
Because it seems that love,
Really hates my company.

He's more than a man,
And this was more than love,
The reason that i lived my life,
but now it shattered through,
because he left again,
To him I just seem untrue

And I know that i was always faithful,
but he just can't accept
That he was just the one man
that toyed with my heart
I don't know what to think

I can't really do this anymore
Telling myself all the little lies
Everytime he walks out the door
I feel me die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt here anymore
I don't wanna shatter my whole life
I just want to be
Faithful to me

I hear it in the trees,
As i'm sitting right here,
Preparing for another fight
a kiss upon my cheek,
is something he just does,
to cover up the lies he tells
he says he's going out
i know his real intent
to go off and be so untrue
but then he just says
that i'm the one untrue
but its all a dirty lie

And I know that i was always faithful,
but he just can't accept
That he was just the one man
that toyed with my heart
I don't know what to think

I can't really do this anymore
Telling myself all the little lies
Everytime he walks out the door
I feel me die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt here anymore
I don't wanna shatter my whole life
I just want to be
Faithful to me

Our love,
the trust,
I might as well take a gun and put it to my head,
Get it over with,
I can't even do this
Anymore, ooooooh, Anymore

I can't really do this anymore
Telling myself all the little lies
Everytime he walks out the door
I feel me die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt here anymore
I don't wanna shatter my whole life
I just want to be
Faithful to me

Fading:I can't really do this anymore
Telling myself all the little lies
Everytime he walks out the door
I feel me die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt here anymore
I don't wanna shatter my whole life
I just want to be
Faithful to me






User Comments: [2] [add]
Noble Legolas
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 09, 2009 @ 11:49pm
I think you're very talented, because it flows beautifully. To me personally the song is a little depressing, but I'm sure there are people out there who can appreciate the lyrics as they are. Keep up the good work ^^


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 16, 2009 @ 12:03pm
here's one of those late comments of mine.

It's good how you altered the words from its original
it's as if this was another counterpart of the song

nice concept with the faithfulness, too

keep it great ^^



Hertzsprung
Community Member
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