Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

My Songs
Just songs i wrote or write...just thought id show them off maybe see what people think. I'd like a reaction some are deep while others are just fun. I mean the more people i have looking at this the further i can develop as a songwriter.
(I've been in writers block for a while but i think a lot that has happened to me recently has broken that and wrote this little gem...hope its as good as i think it is)

Lightsphere

Sitting
In the dark
listening
To the sounds
Of the light
Of the light
Of the light
Light
Light
Lightsphere

(15 second of straight rhythms and beats)

I sit
In the back
hearing all
that you do
the bad things
that i hear
make me sick
in bad ways
you come home
telling me
you miss me
and love me
but in fact
you are here
breaking me
into tiny little pieces

at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat
and the beat controls the soul
and the soul controls the heart
at the lightsphere
where you do your dirty work
where you think you can't get caught
where you think you can be saved
at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat
and the beat controls the soul
but the soul cant keep my heart
from hurting
at the lightsphere
at the lightsphere
oh oh yeah

(7 second of oh oh and rhythm and beats)

i walk
toward the back
wanting to
leave this hell
at this place
you call home
that i call
disgusting
how can you
break my heart
and just sit
and not care
and just lie
to my face
i am done
through with all the lies

at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat
and the beat controls the soul
and the soul controls the heart
at the lightsphere
where you do your dirty work
where you think you can't get caught
where you think you can be saved
at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat
and the beat controls the soul
but the soul cant keep my heart
from hurting
at the lightsphere
at the lightsphere
oh oh yeah

so now i stand
at the door
thinking why oh why oh why
did i get
what is happening
in this situation
i just want
to get out
and escape the lies you told
the lies
the lies
the hurtful little lies

at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat (beat)
and the beat controls the soul (soul)
and the soul controls the heart (yeah)
at the lightsphere
where you do your dirty work (work)
where you think you can't get caught
where you think you can be saved
at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat (beat)
and the beat controls the soul (soul)
but the soul cant keep my heart (soul)
from hurting
at the lightsphere
at the lightsphere
oh oh yeah

Fading:
at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat (beat)
and the beat controls the soul (soul)
and the soul controls the heart (yeah)
at the lightsphere
where you do your dirty work (work)
where you think you can't get caught
where you think you can be saved
at the lightsphere
where the lights control the beat (beat)
and the beat controls the soul (soul)
but the soul cant keep my heart (soul)
from hurting
at the lightsphere
at the lightsphere
oh oh yeah






User Comments: [4] [add]
Wretched-Egg
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Mon Nov 23, 2009 @ 08:46am
the lyrics are pretty good. I like the story that you've put out here. I tried to read it to a it so a 4 count but couldn't get the right tempo. I'd like to hear you singing it later on if that's ok


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 23, 2009 @ 11:20pm
It looks good. I can see this as a semi-techno or a jazzy tune. Maybe go jazzy 2-step w/ light synthesized rhythm (keyboard) in the background.



Ghost of Accuser
Community Member
Kewlbro
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Tue Nov 24, 2009 @ 06:09pm
I like the lyrics you have a tru gift but when are you going to sing it lol
just kiding but yea I realy do like your lyrics


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 28, 2009 @ 07:27am
K I guess I'm a little bit late.

The lyrics is good (i can relate sweatdrop )
Good choice of words especially with the~
"where the lights control the beat
and the beat controls the soul
but the soul cant keep my heart"

Like the comments above ...
I want you to sing it!
And please continue writing these songs coz it's great 3nodding



Hertzsprung
Community Member
User Comments: [4] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum