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My Songs
Just songs i wrote or write...just thought id show them off maybe see what people think. I'd like a reaction some are deep while others are just fun. I mean the more people i have looking at this the further i can develop as a songwriter.
CRY

Don’t cry for me
I beg you please
I’m not worth it
I’m not worth your pain
Please stop those tears
And smile for me
It’s all I ask of you to do
Just the simple thing I ask
Of you

I know when I left
You didn’t know how
To live or feel about it
Because I was always there
I want you to know
I’ll always be there
In some way I will always try
To be there just don’t cry for me
No more

Don’t cry for me
I beg you please
I’m not worth it
I’m not worth your pain
Please stop those tears
And smile for me
It’s all I ask of you to do
Just the simple thing I ask
Of you

I feel all the pain
You feel every night
Because I’m not around to see
Your beautiful smile
I know that it’s tough
I know things are hard
I promise you it will get better
Just give it some time
I promise you

Don’t cry for me
I beg you please
I’m not worth it
I’m not worth your pain
Please stop those tears
And smile for me
It’s all I ask of you to do
Just the simple thing I ask
Of you

Don’t cry for me
I beg you please
I’m not worth it
I’m not worth your pain
Please stop those tears
And smile for me
Fading: It’s all I ask of you to do
Just the simple thing I ask
Of you






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David2074
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 08, 2009 @ 07:46pm
It is pretty but kind of sad. I'm sure that was intentional of course.
I suppose I am supposed to feel sad for the person who is crying.
What I find though is I feel kind of sad for the person singing because he/she does not think he is worth being cried over.

I'm not very good at visualizing the rythem of the song so I can't say much about that. It SEEMS okay but I think I would have to hear it to music. That isn't you though. I have the same problem looking at professional song lyrics that have already made it big. If I don't aready know the tune I have trouble figuring out how it should sound in my head.

Thanks for being brave enough to post and share. That sort of thing always opens you up to comments from rude people.

David


commentCommented on: Sat Oct 10, 2009 @ 09:48pm
hey its me i just read ur song and i like it, i believe u will make a wonderful song writer



Kewlbro
Community Member
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