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My Songs
Just songs i wrote or write...just thought id show them off maybe see what people think. I'd like a reaction some are deep while others are just fun. I mean the more people i have looking at this the further i can develop as a songwriter.
When I Step

When I step
I see the world in motion
When I step
I step to the music notes
When I step
It is to the beat I see
Dancing in the moonlight
Dancing in the moonlight

When I step
I see the world in motion
When I step
I step to the music notes
When I step
It is to the beat I see
Dancing in the moonlight
Dancing in the moonlight

My trip into the space
Was covered in glitter
The shining of the stars
Had made dancing feel so right
I felt as if body
And the soul of the mind
Was taking over me
And I didn’t know why
So I just stepped
Stepped
To the beat in my heart
I just stepped
Stepped
To the rhythm inside
I just stepped
Stepped
Till it felt oh so right
And now I feel
And now I feel that

When I step
I see the world in motion
When I step
I step to the music notes
When I step
It is to the beat I see
Dancing in the moonlight
Dancing in the moonlight

I stepped into the club
To hear music pumping
Just Pumping through my veins
Bringing my feet straight to life
I want to have a dance
A dance that’ll change me
The person that I was
To the person tonight
So I just stepped
Stepped
To the beat in my heart
I just stepped
Stepped
To the rhythm inside
I just stepped
Stepped
Till it felt oh so right
And now I feel
And now I feel that

When I step
I see the world in motion
When I step
I step to the music notes
When I step
It is to the beat I see
Dancing in the moonlight
Dancing in the moonlight

Fading: When I step
I see the world in motion
When I step
I step to the music notes
When I step
It is to the beat I see
Dancing in the moonlight
Dancing in the moonlight






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Wolf fairy13
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 20, 2009 @ 07:23pm
>w< i really like
D= i wish i could really here someone sing it and all that stuff T^T


commentCommented on: Mon Dec 21, 2009 @ 12:12am
dude this song is amazing i tried to find a beat on my own for it and i think i did and the lyrics are just so alive when i was singing it to my own rythem i listened to the lyrics very carefully and dude, u know wat long story short it is amazing and great fused 2gether keep it up



Kewlbro
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Noble Legolas
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 22, 2009 @ 07:31pm
What kind of song is it? If you're going for Trance/House music this is a lovely corny piece that fits right into the genre. For a ballad perhaps it a lil too much, but sell it to Armin van Buuren and you'll be making a fortune ^^
Then again that's just my humble opinion. I can't write stuff like this to save my life! Again well done!


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