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place to store poems and ideas
poems, begginings of storys
tommorow the light will shine down
it will turn my face into smiles instead of my permanet frown
happiness, what is happiness to me?
I would not know for i have never been free
of hate, sadness, depression
this is the truth, my confession
the sun beats down on my tearfull face
my clothes go from rags to fancy lace
I smile for the first time in my life
I drop the knife
happy i am for once and for all
until tommorow when my smile will fall






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cutesparklez
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 25, 2006 @ 02:30am
omg that is beautiful crying
did u write it youself????

heart always sparklequeen1993


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 11, 2006 @ 12:17am
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Shahmirzadi
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soopspoon
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 11, 2006 @ 12:17am
That is really good writing, but a little depressing! I love your word choice! GOOD JOB! biggrin


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