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Silverhand's random stories and poems that need to be expressed :P I plan to start a storie if i hav time and stuff, and also poems and junk SO be ready for randomness-ish stuff


Silverhand94
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A New Story Begins
The Anciet Forest of Cylestie
20 years ago
A small elf is found in the home of a raided elf family. He is the only surviver. The mother's limp body is slashed and thrown to the side. There was no father. As far as the elf population of this forest knows, the mother had no quarrles with anyone. That is except for the human that no one but the mother and the High-Preist knew about, that is the father of the small elf that was found in a little hollow in the tree-house.

Present Time
Thorne is a young, half-elf that, as far as his adopted family says, is a large handful that trouble seems to follow EVERYWHERE. His adopted family knows that Thorne will never be accepted in either the elf or human society, and therefor needs the protection of the royal family. Thorne's adopted father, Restie, is the High Preist of the forest community of Cylestie, and therefor holds high power in the region. His mother, Goldmoon, is leader of the scouts of the region, and his brother and sister, Arie and Riverwind, are both warriors of their own trade. Like all elves, they each specialize in a different magic. Restie Uses the power of the earth to heal and guard those in need, Goldmoon Uses lighting, Arie Uses wind, and Riverwind Uses water. In 20 years Thorne still has yet to harness his powers and element. Restie believes that it is the human in him that blocks this ability.
"Why does it matter whether or not if i use magic or not!?! it should be up to ME!!" Thorne would argue when the topic would arise.
"Because it is part of the traditions of the Forest!!!" Restie would counter.
Year after year Thorne would listen to this arguement and finally became sick of it and so in the dead of the night, he took his hunting bow and dagger and fled from the Forest's protection.





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Sam the Strange
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comment Commented on: Thu Jan 29, 2009 @ 04:14am
eek You wrote something BY CHOICE! I'm proud of you! 4laugh
Now where are your poems? I wanna read 'em.


comment Commented on: Sat Feb 07, 2009 @ 09:44pm
Misspelled words:
survivor
In sentence 2, elf is spelled alf.
Second sentence of Present Time, Thorne is not capitalized.
there for should be therefor
^^ spelled wrong twice
'are both warriors OF their own trade'
believes
It should be capitalized.
whether
you said would would, ha ha, you only need one
because
finally


Your story is special like my rash. smile
Ha ha, I love you and please don't kill me.



iSkaterBelle
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xXOoToXiC_CuPcAkEoOXx
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comment Commented on: Tue Mar 03, 2009 @ 09:56pm
daymm i like it!!! ur good at this! but are you going to leave me dangling off this cliff hanger? if you dont know what that means, look it up! lol no it means an unfinsished story or book that leaves you dangliing wanting more too it and an ending!!!!


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