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the adventures of takeshi leer ohmishi book1 CHP#4
The adventures of takeshi leer ohmishi book 1
Title:my teacher,my sister,my gaurdain
book: #1
chapter: #4

In honor of my sister ritz,may she rest and peace and feel no more pain where she is.aman...

The day after my sister rath had left into a strange fog my fathers brother came to vist again,she brought a older girl about 6 months older then me so she had to be about 14,she looked at me strangly like if I was a puzzel with a missing peice.after many mintues of staring she shook her head and said hello,some how I felt like this was a important person for my life.we played laughing as she teached me many new things about our world and even about our star sky.she showed me how to accept life's actions and its pains.she was my gaurdain and I was her light.Thogther we stood hand in hand and fought off the darkness of the pain as many months passed and when she fell id protect her and i wouldnt let the darkness take her,I never did and throught it all we grew stronger until a couple months later our lives became crushed we had so much pain we couldnt fight.

ritz held me when I cryed for the lose of friends and when I was in pain from traing to hard she would smash me until I would fight and fight even more against her until I would be coruage to become stronger,she didnt fight out of hate or anger but out of love to incorage me to do 10 times my psychical strength.This made me copetive even tho I was still weak I pushed and pushed to make me proven to be a normal person in socity.when we didnt fight she would drink alittle and I would let her,but I hated the thought of it,the smell of death..just didnt make me feel comfotable,we go to the feilds and chase the butterflys and birds away and laugh as we sat under the big oak tree in the citys park.

the final week I see my teacher,my sister and my guardain was appon me.the land had been attcked by bandits and much of the forest was being burned.My father was in charge of a special force to kill the bandits and protect what was left.One night they came for my father to discoruage the group,I awoke to ash in my lungs and the crys of my baby sister no older then 3 hiding by my bedside crying.I coughed and I saw a dark figure run towards us,it was my father,he grabbed me and ran me outside.half the house suddenly collapesed as he went beack into rescure my mother,I held yori close as my fathers brother came with water benders.Ritz came and took me and yori far from the house,I cratteled yori as ritz held onto me,my fathers brother ran inside to try to rescue my father but befor he could get there the house fell down and killed everything in it...the next day...the bodys of father and mother were found burned...they took the bodys and cremated them I took the ashs to the top of the moutain and spread them across the land.rath appered that day,but befor I could say hello she smiled,winked and disappered.I saw rath in a black dress,black sun glasses,heels and even a umbrela and then...gone...just like that.ritz moved...this is when my path began and where a angel of gods land would come down and apper.






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Sugar Dive
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 27, 2008 @ 04:54pm
Asdhjkghsjkah. You should have expanded this chapter! This chapter was good smile . x)!!!!!!

Wooooo. xD!


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