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the adventures of takeshi leer ohmishi book1 CHP#3
The adventures of takeshi leer ohmishi book 1
Title:my hidden sister
book: #1
chapter: #3

after many month's everything became calm I coutined to traind I became taller,biked up moutains and did 200 pushups in 7 mintues.My body became stronger almost a skin coded armor.i took good care of yori,when my mother wasn't breast feeding her or when she wasnt asleep and after my training,I would take care of her.Two more months went by,yori learned how to walk on her own and when she didnt see me at her crib side she would walk out to the traing ground's and watch me pratice.I reamber she once stood up and began to pratice to swing a stick,it was cute and I didnt pay much attion not wanting her to think I was gonna baby her about it.After that day she began to do some other things with me more pratice not all of them.My mom use to come and watch us both,we never even see her standing in the arch way of the path inside the cortyard.When I got away from pratice,my sister,and my mom and father I would run down to the forest,found this old water fall.I would sit by it and one day as I dipped my feet into the pool of cool rushing water,a woman dressed in a green cape torn alittle at the bottom edge wearing brown baggy pants a greenish brownish shirt and brown boot's,holding a katana at her side tied to her black belt in a black shinning case,and haveing a hood drown tightly over her so i couldnt see much of her face.She looked no older then 23 from what I heard and could see.She came up and asked me."You are takeshi leer ohmishi,right,am i correct?".I replied "yes I am...but how does that concern you..." I put my hand on my sword just incase. "dont threat young one,I whont hurt you...for you see.." she dropped her hood and i watched as her grey crimsone hair fall to sholuder length and i looked at her silver colored eyes,and tho she looked northing like anyone i knew...she sounded like my mother."... I am your sister rath...hello brother" and she hugged me.

Compelete shocked, I had no clue what to say or do at all and I just lifted my arms and trustfully hugged her.I didnt know why but I believed her...I felt warmth...how she found me...I never knew but I walked with her tho the plain's back to the house.sister being held in my mothers arm's carried sideways giggling sucking her thumb,father a few feet behind following were heading towards us as we walked towards them."so takehsi...tell me befor we get to the house...is that girl i see our sister?"rath asked me.I turned my head for a moment noticeing her stareing straight and i stared back also foward and replied "yes,papa and mama told me i have to take care of her".she sighed for amoment and spoke again "does she have the moon crecent embolized on her back"."yes,but how did you..." befor I could finish asking and repling she cut in and said "so I will train you brother as father has".I didnt ask much and was confussed but I just nodded as we stopped.I took yori into my arms and mother hugged rath,my father watching beside her hugged her after mother and said "its good to see you,I thought this war had killed you" she laughed and replied "mo'ther you know it takes more then that to kill me".mother once again hugged rath and spoke "my child,your other father would of been proud of you...im just so happy to see you"
"mo'ther i heard you had gaven birth to a boy and a girl,im glad to see you did and are healthy,step fa'ther,i bring new's to you and mo'ther from the north...come...you need to hear this,takeshi play with yori outside the house" my sister told my parents.they 3 of them walked into the house.

I played with yori almost 2 hours then my sister came from the hosue she looked at me and stopped,hugged me and kissed my check...broth'er i belive you will keep yori safe.I am proud of you,we will crose paths again...and if you ever need me... then wish on the north'ern star's with this neclace". She took from her pocket a sun yellow looking necklace and she put it around my neck. "sister rath....will I ever see you again..."I aksed...then... I began to tear up...I was unhappy but I just meet this person and knew northing of her but that she was my elder sister...and I couldnt stop from tearing up."now,now takeshi...dont cry...you are a warrior now...you musn't cry...reamber I will return when fate decide its time...reamber to protect yori....and protect this town..." she said hugging me. she got up and without another word she left disappering into a fog from the forest.Mother called us for super and I took yori into the house.






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Sugar Dive
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 27, 2008 @ 04:50pm
This chapter wasn't that bad. I think you should try to add more detail. Sometimes you have run-on sentences. Try to break them up a bit. You have a lot of potential ^_^


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