I want to ring Despiric neck.
Damn Despies, damn them to hell!
I hate being associated with them, none the less them being anywhere near my characters. This worsens the fact one of them want to be my cat's mate on a forum I go to. -shudders- She was going to Mudslide, right from the start. In her bio (whch was pitiously riddled with sentences screaming 'I AM A DESPIRIC WHORE SHOOT ME'.
Look at it, if you can read it the fragments and such.
Name: Lilyfrost
Age: 24 moons
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior
Gender: She-cat
Picture: pantransit.reptiles.org
Description: She is a tortoiseshell.She has a white underbelly.She is kind of thin for a she-cat at this age.She has beautiful colors like brown,black,and gold.The white on her face is mixed with gold.Her paws are white black and gold.Her breed is a tabby.Because her forehead has a M on that is a gold-black color.Her tail is a solid black color.Her ears are gold-black.Her eyes are a soft brown.
Personality: She loves kits.Sometimes she won't visit the nursery in a day or so.Because it pains her some much to see and remember that she doesn't have any.She is just looking for her special tom-cat.
She loves to flirt with tom-cats.But they always seem to already have a mate.Aren't they lucky.She hates it when other cats call her small it is true.But if you don't know her don't say anything or your ears will be clawed off.
She was born very small.She got it from her dads' side.And her dad was a noble cat and if you make a creak about her father You will have no ears.
History:She was born a forest cat.But she is not originally from thunderclan.She was born in windclan.But her mother and father both died in a battle with shadowclan when she was 3 moons.So she followed he sent line back to shadowclan and then she learn that the fourtrees leads to all clans.So she followed the best sent she could find.That came to be thunderclan.One of the best clans she trusted her nose and starclan to lead her to her place where she belonged and she found it.
So after the leader accepted her she was suckled by a queen.And now after a few years here she is just enjoying herself.
Example of RPG:Lillyfrost found the most wonderful sent of mouse she was getting ready to pounce on it when out of the bushes came flying cat right into her."Slow down there.What is wrong?She asked after getting up."There is a fight at camp.My mentor told me to come and find you because you are the best fighter we have along with mudslide of course."Lillyfrost and the young apprentice were running through the woods when she started to hear the yowling of cats fight and then she realized it.She is going to be fighting her birth clan.But she knew she had to do it for her adopted clan to stay loyal.She she yowled the battle cry she has been practicing on for many moons.She fought off an apprentice and an older warrior.Then they retreated and then she figured it out her mother was still alive.
Secret Word: *Blocked Out*
Now, pay attention to this:
because you are the best fighter we have along with mudslide of course."
Lilyfrost used to be pathetic. Now she's lower than pathetic. -can't believe she didn't see that when she scanned her bio for the first time-
Mudslide: -hides under a rock, whimpering- 3x Elan better make the ThunderClan shecat soon.
-pets- Don't worry, Muddy, my dear boy. For Dess and I have thought up a plan! Yar!
Basically, Muddy's tired of being rejected. And when a certain Despie she-cat attempts to get close to him, a plan forms. He'd get revenge on the she-cat race, yes he would! After a single thread together, Mudslide rudely rejects Lilyfrost, telling her to GTFO Naito's internet.
xDDD Actually, he's gonna go psychocrazy and attack her if she makes a move on him. Which, of course, she will.
Oh, and she's Clan-rasict. Meaning she hates all other Clan except the Protaganist one. The oh-so-annoying ThunderClan.
-hugs ShadowClan and WindClan and RiverClan- I'm sorry you have to deal with PMS!Firestar. DDDD:
Leopardstar: O_o
Onestar: GASPLOL ATTAAAAAACK!
Blackstar: ...-inches away-
Raggedstar: I AM RAGHEAD HEAR ME ROAR!
Moltenstar: -snorts and plays Chess-
Ceruleanstar: OMG A BURDY RUN!
Has this turned into a ramble? Yes. But I'm still fuming. >C
She made Lilyfrost age automatically, going from 26 moons to 32 moons in one RL moon.
Surprise, surprise, Mudslide's 36 moons. stare
Oh, and after he goes psycho on Lilyfrost, Elan has a ThunderClan she-cat she's making that WON'T be a despie, and wll be Muddy's mate. C:
Damn Despies, damn them to hell!
I hate being associated with them, none the less them being anywhere near my characters. This worsens the fact one of them want to be my cat's mate on a forum I go to. -shudders- She was going to Mudslide, right from the start. In her bio (whch was pitiously riddled with sentences screaming 'I AM A DESPIRIC WHORE SHOOT ME'.
Look at it, if you can read it the fragments and such.
Name: Lilyfrost
Age: 24 moons
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior
Gender: She-cat
Picture: pantransit.reptiles.org
Description: She is a tortoiseshell.She has a white underbelly.She is kind of thin for a she-cat at this age.She has beautiful colors like brown,black,and gold.The white on her face is mixed with gold.Her paws are white black and gold.Her breed is a tabby.Because her forehead has a M on that is a gold-black color.Her tail is a solid black color.Her ears are gold-black.Her eyes are a soft brown.
Personality: She loves kits.Sometimes she won't visit the nursery in a day or so.Because it pains her some much to see and remember that she doesn't have any.She is just looking for her special tom-cat.
She loves to flirt with tom-cats.But they always seem to already have a mate.Aren't they lucky.She hates it when other cats call her small it is true.But if you don't know her don't say anything or your ears will be clawed off.
She was born very small.She got it from her dads' side.And her dad was a noble cat and if you make a creak about her father You will have no ears.
History:She was born a forest cat.But she is not originally from thunderclan.She was born in windclan.But her mother and father both died in a battle with shadowclan when she was 3 moons.So she followed he sent line back to shadowclan and then she learn that the fourtrees leads to all clans.So she followed the best sent she could find.That came to be thunderclan.One of the best clans she trusted her nose and starclan to lead her to her place where she belonged and she found it.
So after the leader accepted her she was suckled by a queen.And now after a few years here she is just enjoying herself.
Example of RPG:Lillyfrost found the most wonderful sent of mouse she was getting ready to pounce on it when out of the bushes came flying cat right into her."Slow down there.What is wrong?She asked after getting up."There is a fight at camp.My mentor told me to come and find you because you are the best fighter we have along with mudslide of course."Lillyfrost and the young apprentice were running through the woods when she started to hear the yowling of cats fight and then she realized it.She is going to be fighting her birth clan.But she knew she had to do it for her adopted clan to stay loyal.She she yowled the battle cry she has been practicing on for many moons.She fought off an apprentice and an older warrior.Then they retreated and then she figured it out her mother was still alive.
Secret Word: *Blocked Out*
Now, pay attention to this:
because you are the best fighter we have along with mudslide of course."
Lilyfrost used to be pathetic. Now she's lower than pathetic. -can't believe she didn't see that when she scanned her bio for the first time-
Mudslide: -hides under a rock, whimpering- 3x Elan better make the ThunderClan shecat soon.
-pets- Don't worry, Muddy, my dear boy. For Dess and I have thought up a plan! Yar!
Basically, Muddy's tired of being rejected. And when a certain Despie she-cat attempts to get close to him, a plan forms. He'd get revenge on the she-cat race, yes he would! After a single thread together, Mudslide rudely rejects Lilyfrost, telling her to GTFO Naito's internet.
xDDD Actually, he's gonna go psychocrazy and attack her if she makes a move on him. Which, of course, she will.
Oh, and she's Clan-rasict. Meaning she hates all other Clan except the Protaganist one. The oh-so-annoying ThunderClan.
-hugs ShadowClan and WindClan and RiverClan- I'm sorry you have to deal with PMS!Firestar. DDDD:
Leopardstar: O_o
Onestar: GASPLOL ATTAAAAAACK!
Blackstar: ...-inches away-
Raggedstar: I AM RAGHEAD HEAR ME ROAR!
Moltenstar: -snorts and plays Chess-
Ceruleanstar: OMG A BURDY RUN!
Has this turned into a ramble? Yes. But I'm still fuming. >C
She made Lilyfrost age automatically, going from 26 moons to 32 moons in one RL moon.
Surprise, surprise, Mudslide's 36 moons. stare
Oh, and after he goes psycho on Lilyfrost, Elan has a ThunderClan she-cat she's making that WON'T be a despie, and wll be Muddy's mate. C:
;;Something's just about to break.
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"She is kinda thin for a she-cat at this age." Despie mentality that thin = better.
"She has beautiful colors like brown, black, and gold." Don't feed us that crap; we'll decide if they're beautiful or not.
Sometimes she won't visit the nursery in a day or so. Because it pains her some much to see and remember that she doesn't have any. She is just looking for her special tom-cat." This screams that she's a slut desperate for smex and babies.
"She loves to flirt with tom-cats. But they always seem to have a mate. Aren't they lucky." Overly flirtatious and ew.
"And her father was a noble cat and if you make a creak about her father You will have no ears." -creakcreak- The nobility is just to make her character "special". XP
"That came to be thunderclan. One of the best clans..." Suck-up.
"Lillyfrost found the most wonderful sent of mouse..." It's a scent, not a sent. Learn to spell your character's name and when to end sentences.
"She she yowled the battle cry that she has been practicing on for many moons." In need of proofreading and consistent tenses.
"...and then she figured it out her mother was still alive." Run-on and she has no explanation as to how she came to that conclusion.
Every sentence in this profile is a fragment, simple sentence, or run-on fraught with spelling and grammar errors. >>