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Random collections of things - oneshots, rants, drabbles, stuff like that. Don't expect much. xD
Phoenix
Something's getting in my way;;



Behold, my horrid attempt at poetry.
[x][x][x][x]
She was but a robin,
sick and feeble.
No one needed her.
Unwanted.

From the nest, she had fallen,
She had been forgotten.
Feathers twisted and turned,
Unkept.

In the distance, a fire roared,
flames licking the trees,
charring and burning,
Unstoppable.

Heat enclosed the robin,
Wrapping around her,
Healing her wounds,
rebirth.

A phoenix,
A fire bird,
A healer,
was born.
[x][x][x]

-shot-
Not sure if this'd be Freeverse of Narrative.



;;Something's just about to break.






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aredanchor
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 05, 2007 @ 02:28am
Nice poem~ <3


commentCommented on: Sat Mar 24, 2007 @ 03:28am
All right, this is pretty late, but I thought I'd point out that I really liked it... xDDDDD



Memoria Technica
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