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Well if many of you did not know I have been writing vampire stories why because it's a good way for me to relieve myself of stress and I was very bored.This story came about based on my friend Alex's dream about us being Turn in to creatures of the night.Well here it goes hope you like it well the first part at least.

What happenes when your greatest fantasy become your harsh reality?Well you see this is what happened to My group of friends and myself of corse.What I write down here my love's is all true, this in fact happened to me and the unfortunate others who recieved the kiss of death.Well Lets begin Shall we?

I will begin my story as I would any, I am born, I live and I die.Unfortunatly for me my death came in the form of a man...No a monster, but I am geting ahead of myself you see this "man" if you would like to call him that comes later in my story. Let's start with when I was still "Alive".

I was born in the city that never sleeps,yes my love's New York,The bronx to be exact.My childhood was a happy one, I had parents that loved me and a sister who always gave me a shoulder to cry on. I could ask for nothing more.My teen years perhaps were the best years of my life. Why?you ask, well my lovely's that is when I met my partners in crime. Amanda who was about five foot six with long brown hair and a purple streak going through the right side of it.She had dark brown eyes and was the loud one in the group. Alex who was about five foot four with curly deep brown hair and blue highlights.She also had dark brow eyes she was the cute argumentative one in our group.And then came myself.I was five foot eight and the tallest among my group of friends,I had brown medium length hair that I would normally wear in a ponytail.I had light brown eyes that would grow brighter int the suns light...the sun how I truly miss it but never mind that.Well I had very fair,light skin and a rather large chest which I believe is the only reason a boy would ever take notice of me.Amongst the group I was the funny seductress with very good advice.

We girls formed a band as a way to vent out all emotions,good or bad.We all for the most part shared the same spirit,but we were all unique in our own ways.After high school we all ended up in the same college,This was an unexpected but overall pleasant surprise.After a few days had passed and everything was in order school wise we all decided to hang out in my dorm.We watched all of our favorite movies,listened and danced to music and just talked about the foolish thing we did as a group years past.The Girls left around eleven o'clock at night but I could still feel a presence,as if someone or something was watching me.I looked around my doorm and noticed the window was open.I peered out into the night and the feeling of someone being there left.I closed The window and turned in for the night.

Im ending this here because I am a bit tired I will write more soon.

I awoke the next morning, took a quick shower and brushed my teeth.I quickly threw on a pair of jeans and my favorite band tee,With my hair still wet I put on my black and white converse with silver anarchy signs I drew on them and rushed out of my room.My first day of actual classes and I was already late.

I managed to find my way to class and get a fairly good seat, far enough away from the teacher but not too far from the board.I believe that first day the class was about chemical bonds or something like that,I don't remember but anyway as soon as the class started It ended.As I walked the halls well ran actually I felt a slight tap on my shoulder I turned around and look up.A boy stood infront of me and of corse my first thoughts were "wow he's hott!".The boy was about twenty-one years of age with medium length black hair(I believe the term would be "Emo" looking hair) about five foot eleven inches with crystal blue eyes.He smiled as if he had read my thoughts and gave me a envelope.I looked at it, the front side had extravagant gold lettering with my name in perfect script,I looked up and he was gone.

In the background I could here the fait yelling of my name "Susan!!!Susan!!!heeeeellllooo!!!!!!!!"I looked down and It was Alex "So who was that?your new boyfriend?" I looked at her with a raised eyebrow "umm no I don't even know the guy" she looked at me clearly unamused "right" she said as she rolled her eyes "So are you ready to go?" I looked at her again quite confused "uhh sure where to again?" I asked "To that new cafe just down the street" I Heard from behind me ,I turned around and to my surprise it was my lovely Amanda "I heard it kicks starbuck's a**" she said with a slight smirk "So yeah are you ready to go?" Alex asked once again "Oh yeah sure lets go" I said with a slight smile.

Again ending this here.

We walked down the street and into the dimly lit cafe.As soon as I entered I could see that our friend Yuritt was there.Yuritt was a slender girl about five foot five with long raven hair and light brown eyes,she was the sporty one of our group.She saw us and gave us a wave.We walked up to the sofa, took a seat and put our books down.

I took the envelope out of my pocket and looked at the gold lettering again before opening it,Amanda looked at me "Whats that?" I looked up "I don't know some guy gave it to me" Yuritt looked at it "Hey as long as it's not from David it's all good" We all laughed and Alex turned to me "So what does it say" I scaned the note carefully "Well it says something about a rave" I kept looking at it when Alex snached it from my hands "Let me see that!" she looked at it "So it's tonight?" I looked at her "I believe so" She looked at all of us "So lets go! what can be the harm?" Yuritt looked at her "No thanks! sorry guys but I have soccer practice" we all looked at her a bit disappointed "You guys have fun I have to go anyway see ya later" we all hugged her then she left.

They all turned to me and I smiled at first I had a bad feeling but then again it was our first college part as a group "Sure what the hell!you only live one" I said with a big smile.Amanda looked at me "We'll meet up at your doorm around six or seven alright love?" I looked at her "Fine by me" she smiled "Great now lets get some damn coffee already!".Alex ordered the capuchino,Amanda got a Hazlenut Late and I just had some black coffee with lots of sugar.

More will come soon!I promis

Later that night I blew out my hair making it look bone straight.I put on my tight black and pink UFO contrast dance pants ,a black top with a pink anarchy sign in the front and my boots.

I heard a knock at the door and I opened it,once again there stood Alex and Amanda. Alex wore regular fitting black pants,platform boots that made her appear five foot seven and a neon blue shirt.Her hair was pulled back and you could faintly see her blue highlights.Amanda hair was bright pink and just a little bit shorter. She wore a neon pink UFO girly pit suit with a tight fitting black top under it, and boots. She smiled at me bearing fangs,I looked at her "Oh shyt Vampyress Erata is in the house!!!!" I told her,she smiled even more and laughed a bit "So you ready yet?" Alex asked.

Moving on...

I looked at her "Yup,let me just grab my trench and we're out of here" I walked over and pulled out my trench coat.I had recieved it as a birthday present when I turned seventeen.We walked out of my dorm room and I locked the door behind us "Let's do this".We entered my red 2006 CLK350 Cabriolet,I left the top down so that we could feel the wind rush through our hair.

We drove about thirty minutes till we finally reached the house,Thanks to the speed of the car and the few shortcuts I took.As I stepped out of the car I looked up at the house,it was a very old mannor which seemed to have been abandoned for quite some time but worst of all the moonlight gave it an eerie glow.

Well Ima write more later.

We all walked slowly up the path to the house but before we reached the door it opened.The young man who gave the invitation was standing right infront of me, he smiled showing some fangs but I though he did the same thing as Amanda so I just brushed it off as nothing.He opened his mouth to speak "We have been waiting for you all night"he said in a calm voice that made me feel a bit uneasy.He looked at me once more "Here let me take that",he removed my trench coat and I let him.Alex and Amanda looked at him "Yeah sure we'll just help ourselves!" Amanda commented he looked at them "oh please forgive me" he took their coats as well.

I brushed the hair away from my face revieling my neck,He looked hungerly at it then walked away. We walked into the main room,Techno music blasted as lights of every color flashed and people danced.

Ya'll gots to wait till I write more sorry.

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