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THE FIRST CHAPTER OF MECH GUARDAIN
(fixed 99% of spelling errors)

There are sound's and site's of explosion's all around a city and huge laser's hitting and exploding on the ground in different part's of the city rapidly."what...where am I?....what is going on?" wondered a young man.We see the young man standing on a hill looking at the city what's happening he is wearing a blue shirt and blue pants' his hair moving in the wind of the fire."i...is this...a dream...it...feel's...so real...."said the young man in a low voice almost a whisper.The night sky is cloudy and filled with smoke.The smell of fire and smoke from the burning city can be smelt floating around in the air.The city is lighten up in flames of light of gold,orange and red.The laser explosion's also light up the city in bright yellowish whitish blast.The hill the young man is standing on has black blade's of glass moving with the wind making a rustling sound.There is one signal tree dead to the left of him where he stands.We now see ship's rising from the ground and trying to escape.The ship's are huge and are the size of a huge tall building 250 yards long. A few are in the air and on the ground below.We see two of them get hit by laser's and explode into two half's falling to the ground and exploding or crushing parts of the city.Then four more get hit two explode in the air one crash and another hits the land and explodes one half remaining.Then we see the laser's stop and then explosion's in the night sky and more of these ship's and what looks to be fighter's and robot's fighting in space.we see something come out of a worm hole and the fighter's and robot's like machine's attack the ship.It fire's and hits the middle of the city causing a white dome shape to become bigger and spread destroying everything in its explosion.It now comes closer to the young man and it is bigger then anything."Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!...uh!....this...this cant be happening!!!.....this can't be real!...ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"yelled the young man.

Now you hear a alarm clock going off in the darkness of the screen.A hand hits the alarm clock button and sits up a bit."Ugh....my head...mmm....tha....that dream it felt so...real"said the young man.The young man is sitting up on a futon.The young man is in a room with blue wall's,a window on the left side and above the futon.A stream of light is coming through the window of the room onto the futon.Pictures of a family line the wall above a dresser that is black with silver handles and is wooden.The floor of the room is marble with a white rug in the middle of the room.Box's of picture's,clothing,degree's,electronics,game's,pencil's,pen's,a camera,bowl's,cup's ,a pillow and a pair of sandals are put against a wall next to a brown door.The young man sat up and looked at the time.The time was 9:31 A.M. it read in red coloring.The alarm clock was rectangular,small,and gray.The room was almost empty nothing but the box's,dresser,futon and alarm clock was left.The young man stood up so we can finally see his hair coloring which is brown and messy.

"Takeshi,leer,ohmishi get up and dressed you have to be out of this house by 10:00 A.M. remember you have to get to the academy.Today is the day you finally GET THE HECK OUT OF MY HOUSE!!!....i mean...um....your breakfeast..will....get..cold I mean...GET DRESSED!!!"yelled Takeshi's mother from down stairs'."Yeah...right mom....I know I'll be down stairs' in a few mom let me get dressed and move these box's to my van so i can get a early start on the rode....yawn...tho i am still tired"yelled James from up stairs'."What ever I don't care just hurry up I'm having my friend's over and your fathers' building a equipment room in there so just makes sure you have every thing with you what ever is left gets thrown out!"yelled James mom from down stairs'."Give me ten minutes to get dressed and down stairs' and then another 5 to grab something to eat and move the box's out of my room"yelled Takeshi back down the stairs'."Fine I'll make you a pop tart to go and you can have what ever you want later" yelled Takeshi's mom from down stairs'.Takeshi began to take off his shirt and put another one on also put new pants and boxers' on.Takeshi grabbed some of the Picture's from the wall and put them in one of the box's.Takeshi began to lift two of the box's and carry them down the stair's and out to his van.The van was blue and big.Inside was a bed,a TV,a mini batter fridge,a DVD player,a system holder,and some cabinets for storage.Takeshi put the box's into the van and repeated the process until the room was empty.

Takeshi put his last box in his van and closed the door.Takeshi walked around to the driver's side of his van and opened the door as he got in he said to his mother "see you on the Holiday's I'll write you when I can".Takeshi closed the door and drove out of the drive way.On his way out he hit the mail box and then drove west towards' the city of metro.A while down the road Takeshi began to slouch and drift into sleep."Yawn...man...im still...tired"said Takeshi sleepily.Takeshi fell asleep still driving the van asleep.An hour later he awoke while still driving and yawned waking up. "I must of fallen...asleep...while....driveing...oh $!#&" Takeshi drove his van right into a tomato stall then he crashed into a metal bicycle rack,flipped the van over it onto a large stone stair case.Which the van flipped all the way down till he reached the bottom.At the bottom the van flipped once more to right side up and then drove into a huge oak tree,then Takeshi smacked his head against the air bag that deplored just before smashing his head into the windshield."ouch!...well there goes my fear of crashing....sigh wonder where i am now..."said Takeshi getting out of his van.Takeshi finally got out and dusted himself off then looked at a sign which read:MTA (Mech training academy)."well at least nothing is psychically broken or emotionally hurt"said Takeshi.He looked at the sign once more and then said "well I'm here now all i have to do is get my schedule and go to my apartment i rented".Takeshi began to walk towards' a large brown brick building.

The brown building had seven window's.Two on the left side visible,three on the front of the top brown brick building,and two on the bottom on the side's of two large door's.The grass Takeshi was crossing was dark green and fresh.The sky barely cloudy and a small breeze was blowing.Some of the trees were full of there leafs which looked pretty as the breeze past through them.A few of the leaf's fell onto the ground and shined in the suns glance of reflection of the sun.Takeshi saw a large group of people waiting at the door's in a packed circle.Takeshi got to the group and waited with the rest of them to await the opening of the large door's to go inside for there schedule's.Five minute's later the door's opened and the large crowd move forward into the building."ok.....aham....aham....AHAM!!!!!!!!!.....thank you....Welcome to the Mech Training Academy library.This is where you will be getting your schedule for your academy classes.Please move forward to find your table with your two or three first letter's of your last name on it and find your schedule there..thank you"said a woman in a red uniform and a ID that read Wendy.The library had shelf's and shelf's of book's.The inside was colored dark red with table's that were brown.Each table had two people at each table in chairs with red uniform's and IDs.James waited in line with two other people.Five minutes later James was at the table and getting his apartment number and schedule.James left to go back to his van and backed it away from the oak tree looking out the driver side window to see.Takeshi was surprised to see his van still running but then again the van saved his life more then once. he then drove down the rest of the road awake this time to his apartment.





 
 
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