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tell me what u think of my poems and my song i wrote please sweatdrop
1st one:
Love is a confusion
A question about our care
But always we'll keep looking
For answers that aren't there/never there
Our heart begins to toy with us
Our fantasies within
Stirring up this longing
For a passion full of sin
Our mind is all a jumble
A path we cannot find
But nor can we convince ourselves
he's better left behind
We always say it will never work
But try for it we will
For even if its impossible
We always try for it still
Always holding doubt
But hope begins to grow
And we die within of torture
Of what we'll never know


(of the 1st poem) ---tis a bit of love and lust.. but the rest of it is our doubt of any relationship
and that its best to leave them behind.. rather than get a broken heart
but we ignore that..
and try anyway
because if we dont..
we'd go insane of wondering wat could have been---


2:
i feel like an empty shell
with nothing left to fill
as if i'm left still waiting for love
and come love never will
he may just end up with me...
but hardly will it last
for all the more i love him..
my future is my past
always left behind
always just the same
for love is one thing left in life
the single most lost game



3(song):
I looked to you for help
Instead of someone else
You were the one I believed
It was my love you received
For I've always cared for you
And no one else
And it was always you...
I turned to for help

I fell in love when we met
The things behind your eyes I'd never forget
It made me understand you
And you still understand me
And I will always love you
But will you always be loving me?

I will stay here
By your side
Forever and ever and always

I will keep you
So far inside
So deep in my heart forever

Its you... it true.. I'm in
I'm in love with you
Its me.. you'll see.. I'll always be there

And I care about you for forever
See me run awat oh never
I will love you always you and me
Ooooooo

Just stay beside me
Hold me tight and hide me
The world will never find me
But I will always be there with you
Oh I will always be there
Oh yes I will always care
Oh I will always be in love... with... you..