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Torn Blue Jeans
The future they say, lays on the sholders, of children like me. But how can I be the future if I can barely be me?
'Nother Poem xDD
Yesh another poem!

Well my sister (she's in 8th grade) had a post it of hers laying on my book, and be not meaning to wink read the post it which was school related, and I thought of this after I had read it:

My Sweet darling dear
You just can’t see you
Just can’t hear me clear.

Because of that we
Just can’t stay the way
We are so I’m sorry.

Yesh it's another OK one x.x






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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 02:36am
this one doesn't flow the way the others do, but I still like it. The six lined poems of Evap xd maybe they'll name a poetry style after you wink


commentCommented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 02:57am
Yesh, I didn't think it flowed all the too well either, but it went with what was on the post it xDD

xd Maybe! And if you didn't notice they are all 5 syliboyls ninja



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