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I made another Poem!! I was lurking through a few threads in AT and I came upon a girl named "waste_of_paint" or something of the sort. And a poem idea came into my head, but it didn't work out at first. So I went to make myself a bagel (xDD) and then half way through that I thought of another, and after carefully thinking this is what I came up with: I painted fake tears rolling down my checks to show all my fears. Now they laugh at me and I cry my real tears so the fake flee. Though I don't think it's as good as my description one. whee What do you think? xp

Posted by: Evaporation Tue Sep 28, 2004 @ 10:05pm

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BRITT WAS HERE.
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Commented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 01:35am


	It's pretty good, though I don't really get the "so the fake flea" part. Mebbeh I'm just being stupid. xp Well, even if I'm not, you're still a much better poet than I. heart EDIT: Oh. You meant flee. xp Yeah, I was just being stupid this time.

Commented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 01:42am


	Thank you ^^; There is a difference in the spelling? I didn't know that xDD -edits it-

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Commented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 02:34am


	=O I luff your poems! so sweet and simple and hauntingly sadish...Anoo, You make me want to post one of my poems, I'll have to do that when I make tonight's entry.

Commented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 02:56am


	Thank you ^^; Yesh I like small simple things, if it was too long it would take me hours and I don't like long poems for some reason xDD I'll see if you already wrote it in a min. and if you didn't I'll read it before school 3nodding heart

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