Ok yes I've edited this...it was too sad and mopey and i'm not in a bad mood anymore. I don't like reading about myself being so down so I edited this whole little section. The poem is still the same though...it is still just as sucky lol.
Lost in the Valley of thorns
hiddden deep and forgotten
lies the soul since the day it was born
to be kept safe and protected from harm
but was confused by hopes and dreams
and left alone with lies and disappointment
never remember and always forgotten
it returns to the valley of thorns
to live in regret
until the day of rebirth
or final judgement day
wow im such a pessimist and a downer today...
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