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Mended Heart
By Dominick Cortes

It never beats the same
It never lets blood flow again
It never breaths a fresh air
It cracks and breaks

Slowly, does it fade away
Swaying from its former light
Falls broken in a thousand pieces
Has lost its rhythm and beat.

It breaks and crumples inside.
And all alone, it creeps from behind
And swarms it all in darkness
For it becomes shallow and fake

It mends a lie
A smile that fools all
Lies are better lived than reality,
Don't we all love to fade towards a lie?

Even under the mask, does it cry
Wailing red tears that fall towards utter woe
The lie never fixes anything
In the end, it just becomes a dark pitted mess.






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bobobo nation
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 04:57am
that's so depressing D:
but i know how you feel when you wrote the poem
hearts never really heal once there broken :/
and ppl try to hide it but deep down inside there still broken
it's very well written..but im tired of depressing D:


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 06:57am
Thats so true...i felt that a while ago xD but hey im feeling better,


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XxDarkKairi_ChanxX
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 08:50pm
hmm...i like the poem...to me it's calm...idk why...guess it's my emo thing....i like it..^^


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 11:28pm
gonk that was really really really depressing
but all the same it was good



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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 12, 2009 @ 09:04pm
crying sad but wonderful


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 19, 2009 @ 07:09am
You know I feel your pain and still feeling...but you know as long as you got some kind of support it's not too hard to pull through as it would be without any support whee



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