It just kills me
thinkin about that dreadful day
Now your next to me cryin'
while in this bed I lay.
It wont be like this for long
the pain will go away.
Like the doctor said,
its only one more day.
Dont worry i'll be fine
to a better place i'll go.
Just when i get there i'll be waiting
For you to finally show.
The pain may be difficult
but i'll stick though it.....you'll see
It wont be like this for long
then you'll finally be with me.
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It supposed to be about someone dying....and this is basicly their last day with a very special person to them. Thought it be a nice change of scenery than my usual poums. Hope you peoples like it(What am i kiddin...its not like anyone looks forward to readin this crap sweatdrop )
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This just has stuff in it that i write...its mostly emo-ish and retarded love-ish type poums...not exactly about anyone i know....and if u like what u read comment...not like anyone cares about my crappy writing...
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I'm really hoping this one isn't out of personal experience as well.
It's very good, especially since it didn't actually happen to you. It's generally harder to make something up than it is to portray something that actually happened to you.
You just proved that you can do both, in poetry, very well.