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Chapter 1 part 7: One RUDE little girl
A young girl walked in the room, she looked as if she was about 11 or 12, and she looked quite tired, as if she had not gotten quite enough sleep for the past week. She walked right up to Brattymatt and he decided it was only to be nice, so he took off his hat and gave a little bow. when they met eye to eye, she promptly smacked him acroos the face.

Ina: "I had her rehearse that just for you detective," Ina said with a foolish smile.

Brattymatt replied with an unusual amount of sarcasm. "It is so nice to see young women get themselves prepared for a very long day."

???: Yeah well you deserve it too, for not watching over your own defenses.

Brattymatt was outraged, but he held his cool. Him and Roxas both remebered what happened last time he had unleashed his dark curse by too much anger, or negative emotions.

He snapped his fingers and called his two assistants. Liam came with fair speed and said hello to everyone, but for some reason, Ghost-Boy was keeping his distance from the little girl.

Ina: Oh, almost forgot, this is Isa, my Assistant. She helped me model my beautiful work of art.

Brattymatt: Ok then, these are my two assistants, Ghost-Boy, and Liam. Now I have some questions for you Ina-

He was immediatly innterupted my Ghost-Boy.

"What was it Ghost-Boy?"

"You mean what IS it sir."

"Thats what I said."

"You said, was, not is, sir."

"Did I?"

"You did sir-

Fury: Will you two just SHUT THE @%#$ UP?!?!? Now Wat ISSSS it Ghost-Boy?!?

Ghost-Boy: Well...I found this hammer.

He had latex gloves, so as not to eliminate the fingerprints.

Brattymatt: Ah, excellent. Before the day is out, we shall take this to our agency so the scientists can figure out who this belongs too.

Ghost-Boy: But that's just it sir, look!

He Turned it over, and in glittery marker, it said:


PROPERTY OF IZA.


*END*

Brattymatt: No comment.

Matt: Oh come on surely you have SOME comment on this.

Brattymatt: well since you asked.......................................................


































































FAIL!






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ReigntheFur
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 06:04am
Jared: Too... Much... Space... @_@

Brattymatt: Whoops... Sorry

Matt: Hah! Now I have something on YOU!


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