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the detective
Episode 5: Clues
After the rude first impression, Brattymatt decided to let it go. After all, his career was at stake here. Ina however, did not seem to care that the detective was doing his job. She was yelling at him for his incompetence.

Ina: "And you could have been here a little sooner! The case is already being inspected as we speak."

Brattymatt was interrupted by what Ina said. Nothing in the world mattered more than the last sentence she spoke. Nobody, NOBODY, dared to do Agent 64's job. That was just cheating.

Brattymatt: Who would DARE to interrupt my work?!?

???: I would, and it is quite worth it to see your face so angry, agent 64.

Brattymatt: Wait...YOU! I thought you were busy with the Loch Ness monster eggs case in Gambino!


*THE END*

Brattymatt: Oh that's NOT cool! You pause at the worst possible times you know that?!? Just when it was getting good too!

Matt: Well, I thoght it was the perfect time to end it because it would add up the suspense.

Brattymatt: And yet cut down the amount of fans of drama. YOU PUT ALL MYSTERY STORIES TO SHAME!

Matt: I think I am quite good at this.

Brattymatt: oh please, you would probably try to describe a house and fail.

Matt: just for that, I am not doing another episode till next monday. Or maybe tomorrow.






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ReigntheFur
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 22, 2008 @ 09:43pm
Jared: Please continue! These are getting good!

Brattymatt: Well, at least we have ONE fan

Matt: Shut up!


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