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The Storm
The sun is gone, the sky is black, Dark clouds loom ominous over my life, Lighting strikes me, a blaze of light, Rain falls; it’s the storm again, The rain on my face can hide my tears, But nothing can hide my scars…
well that last line isnt entirely tru... you could use make-up...lol but i really dont get it....i kno you got this whole "dark depressing end of life thing" going on but maybe you should try something happier...just a little itsy bit....but thats just me...
Alena Zinra Community Member
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Thu Jun 12, 2008 @ 04:16am
I think I've read this before... I like it but... the last two lines dont really mesh well with the others...