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	Before the End
	Before the End


The break of dawn will shine it's first light On the wake of my despair Your so "perfect" lust that has severed love Whispers mocking chords inside my head With wretched truths dancing to that cursed song Dehorn this demon; burn it's wings Lay waste to it's lended power Place your hand into that gaping hole inside of my chest Let my soul sink in Read the sacred scripts of wasted trust Breathe out the ashes of the past Shake the dust from off your clothes Seeds of destruction are sown All will be repaid All will be repaid All will be repaid Sand bares witness to the time The tide is coming in to wash it all away Give me the satisfaction of knowing your mind Before the end of my broken life Clave Kreed · Fri Oct 03, 2008 @ 08:21pm · 5 Comments


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Tsukiko-of-the-Night
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Fri Oct 03, 2008 @ 09:34pm

ooooookay......i cant tell is this a poem like things are bad but getting better....or things are bad and they're staying that way....or things are bad and getting worse?

Audrina Lynn
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Sat Oct 04, 2008 @ 12:24am

first of all,...four words....i really, really liked it...its amazing! and i did notice the mean part..you'll hafta tell me if "she" does...i hope for your sakes at least she truly does cus you sound like you really want her to, or @ least thas what i felt through reading it...whether you say so or not, i think so.it reminds me of something i've been putting off but really needs to be done...but congrats...it was absolutely awesome!

Alena Zinra
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Sat Oct 04, 2008 @ 03:23am

Only one word can describe this... WOW! ^_^

HyperlyXGenetic
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Sat Oct 04, 2008 @ 03:52am

I like this a lot =D
It really depicts how you are feeling, even though I wish someone never made you feel this way *glare* it did make for a great poem thou ^^

Tsukiko-of-the-Night
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Mon Oct 06, 2008 @ 08:11pm

*reads other comments*.....people giv you way to much credit.....lol it was very good nevertheless *smilies!*

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