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I'm going to be entering in poems for a while. Please read them and let me know what you think. Thank you.



Searching for Love I lost the light that shown bright in your eyes I banished the love that was soul and mind I vanquished the sight that told me no lies A rainbow no longer covers the skies And our hearts are no longer intertwined I lost the light that shown bright in your eyes It took me a moment to realize We were finished even though you were kind I vanquished the sight that told me no lies My love turned into anger, then despise As I looked to the stars to try and find I lost the light that shown bright in your eyes A heart I can have, a bondage that ties A place where true love is finally defined I vanquished the sight that told me no lies A love I don't have to compromise And a heart I don't have to keep refined I lost the light that shown bright in your eyes I vanquished the sight that told me no lies

Posted by: Demonic_Dead_Psycho Fri Nov 05, 2004 @ 05:40pm

*Looks around like a lost little puppy dog*

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Bardic Archangel MieKarra
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Commented on: Tue Nov 23, 2004 @ 12:47pm


	All-in-all, it is a decent poem. : smile : A few "ifies" here and there, however all-in-all, it is good. : emotion_hug : Keep up the good work.

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