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Knana
Dawn
The sun Falls
the Moon rises
she lays and dreams
of his words she memorizes


endless i love you's
countless looks at the stars
so close together
kept apart from these bars


she sits at her window
and waits for him to say
some day soon
I'll come take you away


The days go by
and he gets close
coming to her door
with one red rose


the moon falls
the suns wake will occur
they'll watch together
as he holds her
5-1-08






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queen_of _undead
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commentCommented on: Thu May 08, 2008 @ 02:03am
you do relize that if you put all of your work into a book(bcuz yesh i do think that you are that good) many people would finnaly relize the talent of your writing and be one of the few who acctually escape the kind of samll towns we all hate so mucha nd make a name for yourself....



but don't leave to soon..there are way to many people in this s**t town that would miss you too much









but on the plus side you would finnaly be able to go and see aaron....


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