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Candle By Tincanta A small flickering light, So soft, and so small, But such big shadows, That are cast on the wall. You give such warmth, Emit such a radiant glow, You can't fend off much longer, Quietly sinking low. How can you face so much hate? You are so smooth, and calm, so white, You stand so proud, so upright With that flickering little light.

Posted by: tincanta Fri Jul 08, 2005 @ 09:38pm

I'm hardly on, but when I'm on, I'm on. =)

I'd really like an elegant veil or pixie or anything else that's pretty! <3
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Commented on: Mon Jul 11, 2005 @ 01:45pm


	Wow,this is going to sound so dorky,but I loved your use of Imagery. Beautiful poem. <3

Commented on: Mon Jul 11, 2005 @ 06:26pm


	It isn't dorky! It's the optiome of compliment for me! Thank you!!! <3

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