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Tinny's Poetry and Ramblings (COMMENTS WANTED!)
Random stuff.
This is the beginning of a story-poem I'm writing
She sat on that dusty, tall hill,
Isolated by her own stubborn will,
It was late during that horrid night,
Nothing to her felt quite right,
Her clouded head perpetually throbbed,
Not stopping tears as she dauntingly sobbed.

The small, full moon mournfully shone,
The seeds of fear, already been sewn.
With spiny, thorny fingers outstretched,
Her heart, grasped, choaking, wrenched.
A tattered, faded shirt hung off of her form,
A shining dark cloak, wrapped around to keep warm.






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loveangel419
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 27, 2005 @ 03:53am
i really liked it. it gave me good feelings!


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 27, 2005 @ 06:17am
Thanks. ^-^ I love comments.



tincanta
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Lune Isis
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 11, 2005 @ 07:13pm
Sweet poem ^-^!! That rocks. And yes I called you mah friend *refering to your comment on my journal* If your weren't I wouldn't talking to ya or drawing art of us lol! You Should see the one I'm working on now, it's looks so kewl. I can't wait to finish it. ^-^


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