that's right. I am in yet another writing contest. Maybe this time i will do better and actually place this time! (Hey, a girl can always hope!) Anywho, as is my tradition, I will post my entry here, in my journal, and leave you all to commit on it what you will. so on to the peotry i have concocted!
Fall With You
You come in here with that look on your face,
And you say that you where dropped from love's amazing grace.
Now you're saying that you don't know where to go,
Well there's something that I think you should know.
You can fall right into me,
You can fall right to where you wanna be.
And you can fall to that place where you see,
That there is no place that you would rather be.
And know that this is true,
When I say that I will fall with you.
So you're saying that you want more,
Believe me when I say that I've been there before.
You say that you wanna fall,
Well baby I'll tell you once and for all, that
You can fall right into me,
You can fall right to where you wanna be.
And you can fall to that place where you see,
That there is no place that you would rather be.
And know that this is true,
When I say that I will fall with you.
You don't know what to do or say,
And I don't know how long I've felt this way.
Believe me that this wasn't planned,
But baby just take my hand, if
You wanna fall right into me,
If you wanna fall right to where you wanna be.
And if you wanna fall to that place where you see,
That there is no place that you would rather be.
And know that this is true,
When I say that I will fall with you.
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For those of you who were wondering, yes, these are actually more like lyrics than poetry. sweatdrop hopefullly that won't count against me!
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