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Show me your love...{prt.6}
DONGHAES POV
Oh my gawsh, I cannot even beleive this!!! Oh s**t!!! Did she really say what I think she said!!
I pondered upon the thought while walking through the silent hallways when, a spine tingaling scream ran through the building.
"Kumiko!!", I shouted.
I started into a sprint down the hallways, dodging the shunning nurses and almost knocking over a bed cart.I never realized that this would be happening some day.
Me, not ending up being the one she held with happiness.
As I turned the corner to the lounge, I realized that the scream hadn't been of pain but of happiness.
I knew better. To feel this way, to feel this hurt in my heart. I knew that I should be happy for her, seeing her like this, in his arms, and not the embrace of mine.
My heart suddenly skipped a beat, my lungs crushing under the pain. The air was escaping, I can't breathe. It feels as though my heart has been ripped out by her, and she has ripped into infanant peices.
I fall to my knees, on the tiled floors, grasping at my heart and for air.
No, I can't stand it. I had finally put my sweating face on the floor when Kumiko notices me, and everything blanks out.
NORMAL POV
"WHAT??", Kumiko shouts at the Doctor.
Donghae lyes in the bed motionless I.V'S hooked into his hand and his chest bare with wires attached to whatever which were they can get to.
"HE HAD A F****** HEART ATTACK!!", shouted the obliously pressed by guilt Kumiko,"HOW THE HELL DID THIS HAPPEN?"
"You tell me", the frightened Doctor spitted out while waltzing out of the room silently.
Several moments later, Kumiko broke down.
She fell into a chair at the side of Donghaes bed and crossed her arms on his boiling bare chest, she then put her head on her arms, and weeped to sleep.
Mean while at the coffee house again
"Some things wrong",Sungmin said ,sipping his hot chocolate.
"The only thing that is wrong, is that you brought your own Hot Chocolate to a COFFEE house",Yoochun said slyly to himself.
" Yoochun hyung!!! Thats when you say,'What is it? Whats wrong?' and make a big episode!!",Sungmin said punching him in the arm, resulting in Yoochun spilling coffee all over his pants.
"Oh crap!!!Its hot !Hot!! Hot!!!!HOT!!"Yoouchun got up and grabbed a napkin,which probly wasen't very smart, and slaped it on were the coffee had spilt.
"OH MY NUTS", Yoochun squeeled out.
"Scene has been made now, lets go."
Sungmin took Yoochuns hand and dragged him out of the coffee shop and to a park, it was still moderatly mudy from the days before, so they walked on the path.
"Some thing is wrong though, I know it, its some thing.",Sungmin explained.
Then Sungmins eyes widend and he stopped walking, stopped breathing.
"Are you okay Sungmin?You look like youve seen a Gawi."(Gawi=Ghost)
Sungmin whispered words no dog could even hear, he closed his eyes, then did a quick turn and ran.
Yoochun stood there left in his trail.
He then decided to tag along.
By the time he caught up, the were on the 3rd floor of a large hospital.
Sungmin was at the counter gasping for air as he talked to the lady at the counter, then he re-took off in a sprint.
"There goes another one",she sighed
"What room did he go to?" Yoochun asked with curiosity.
"Room 1807"
"Cho maph soom ni da~" (thank you), Yoochun blured out as he then ,too , sprinted across the long hall.
"Poor boy", the lady said solomnly.
Yoochun POV
I sprinted across the hall way so many doors ,so many numbers...
1801




1803





1805









1807...

I turned immendiatly when I saw the number.
I stopped in my tracked, almsot topling over on the floor.


Sungmin stood there at the end of the bed. His hat across his chest.
I saw Kumiko, lieing across a body,sleeping talking
"'Saranghaeyo~ oppa, no oppa! No!'"
She almost shouted.




I then looked at the heart meter, just beating.




I then looked at the bed.
He lay there, tubes everywhere.


I was unable to speak, let alone breathe.
I couldn't move.



Tears started rolling down my face.
The man next to Donghae (another paitent) Started to have a seizer, p robably because of all the comotion, or maybe, he was sad, and couldn't stay her any longer, he was in to much pain even looking at the 17 year old boy like that, all hooked up to wires.



Nurses started rushing over shoving through the door way.
"CLEAR"




I closed my eyes, still nothing.


"CLEAR"



Tears rolled numerously down my face.

"One last time!!"



"CLEAR"



Nothing.
I stopped breathing and heared the sighs of the other nurses.
I then heard the cry of Sungmin.
"OPPA"
He screamed.
As he feel to his knees at the end of the bed.



I could then hear a faint


Beep





Beep


























BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP






User Comments: [2]
carly802
Community Member





Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 04:25am


eek I HATE YOU!!!1 WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT crying i can not belive you were able to do that i am like omg!!!!


softballluver13
Community Member





Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 04:48am


omg! it's really good. but i know someone is dead but i can't tell who it is. is it sungmin or donghae. How did you get so descriptive. i need some advice from you. or did you use the advice i gave you to write it. hehe. I DON'T LIKE IT THOUGH.....................I LOVE IT! HEHE ^^ POST CHAP 7 SOON!


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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