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I'm going to be entering in poems for a while. Please read them and let me know what you think. Thank you.
Something More
Looking through my eyes of green
I see things that are yet unseen
I see the ring of love in air
I see visions of thoughts we will share
The bond of life a bond so loved
It makes me think of a future beloved
Emotions are running through my vein
Emotions that are made quite plain
I see your eyes and see the sun
Our destiny will now be done
You take my soul entwined with yours
Cover in gold and cover old sores
You turn me around look in my eyes
You swear your love as my pain dies
Walk hand in hand on the shore
Perhaps there is something more

This is one of my poems. If you have any thoughts, please respond.






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Rikki_kms08
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 18, 2004 @ 09:52pm
wow.. thats really strong, and it's really a good poem. your really good! keep up the great work.

heart ,
Kait

I understand why you don't want my dad to see now..


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