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I made a journal on Gaia to help sort my ideas for my book, which is Untitled, Unstarted, and in need of work. I know it sounds like I have no idea what I am doing, but in reality, I'm still planning because I have so many ideas, and I'm trying to make this book PERFECT.

I guess I'll add some background on my book:

It's untitled, but it centers around a character named Norpse, a good-hearted Elven boy who's father died on Norpse's Day of Initiation (The age his clan turns of age). There is three other characters that play a massive role in this book. Deline, a mischievous assassin sent by Akouzi to kill Norpse and any who is in league with him. She is not human nor elven, but a mixture of both and a shunned race throughout the world Norpse and company lives in. The third character is Melzar, an enraged Human of an ancient bloodline that has abilities to control the elements whose family was killed and he seeks revenge. The last character is Glorf, a dwarven warrior who I've yet given a plot to.

I don't want anyone else's ideas, just feedback. Let me know if you would enjoy to read that or make little comments like "Too much dialog" or "Too little detail." With your help this book will become amazing, and if you just want to read it, so be it xd