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Master Zieke's Poem Portfolio These are the poems i have wrote! please comment on them and help me improve as a writer!


Axyl Orion
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Shallow Grave
My newest poem! My inspiration was going to be in a fight at school and she didnt know it but i did... that made me know how i truly felt about her and then i wrote this! Enjoy and tell me what you think!

Shallow Grave

The feelings I’ve felt,
Were nothing but pure.
I constantly wonder,
It there is a cure.
I felt so many,
Changing each day.
How could I know,
They could change in this way?

Your feelings you’ve felt,
Have torn me apart.
You have hurt me so bad,
You’ve broken my heart.
I’m sure you’ve felt many,
Feelings towards me.
You’ve filled up with hatred.
Why cant you see?

You’ve buried me,
Into the ground.
I can’t tell you it hurts.
I can’t make a sound.
I’m lost in the dirt.
In a shallow grave.
I wish you could know,
It’s your love that I crave.

I feel cold and dizzy.
I am suffocating.
What is the reason,
For all of your hating?
It makes know sense,
How I could hurt so much.
And you leave unscathed.
Not even a touch.

It pains me to believe it.
You cant be this crazy.
I continue spinning,
My vision gets hazy.
I fall into darkness.
Into an oblivion of death.
I wish you would love me.
As I take my last breath.






 
 
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