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story i made up
i couldnt think of a name at the time so i used my gaia one... i think its pretty ok but tell me what you think what i should work on... i love writing and only critisism will help me to get better...
once upun a time in a world full of magical poniez and elves, there lived a rebel. she was always getting into trouble but since the world she lived in was so flippin foo-foo they never had the heart to accualy do anything to hurt this girl.this girl, also known by many as Patpat, would do anything for attention even death defying stunts! she wanted more than anything to get out of her foo-foo world so she went to the villiges wizard and had told him she wanted to go to the place every mother told their child to scare them,'the real world'. the wizard of course was shocked, it was unheard of to want to go there but the wizard wanted to make PAtpat happy. He made her drink a potion then he threw pixie dust in her face! as she coughed she felt dizzy, she struggled to stay on her feet. then when she looked around she was surrounded by lights and so many different colors! She was in...Japan.but right now she has made so many new, great friends people who arent anything like people back home! she is going to highschool and has just started getting what everyone from my world gets, the time in my world that determines wether you turn into some weirdo creature or anything could happen. for her, she is recieving powers(you know like witch powers XD) she stay the same prettyfull girlie she is but has to try and hide her powers from everyone in this world...





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