today we were learning about telling and showing writing. telling writing is a sentence like this: Yesterday we won our baseball game. showing writing is like this: our vigorous game was about to be lost. i started to pack up my bat bag when suddenly, CRACK! anthony hit a 3 run homer and won the our championship game. anthony is now or hero for that.:: that didnt really happen thats just a story now i want all of u reading my journal to turn this telling sentence into a showing paragraph (its good for ur brain blaugh blaugh blaugh )
the last day of school was the best
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