Lord, Deliver:
itle and Overview. ” Lord, Deliver” was conceptualized under the title: “Dear, Lord, Delver” [yes, influenced by that song Deliver Us but is not related, as far as I’m concerned]. Its main topic is the delivery of an influencial soon-to-be Ruler of the kingdom and his effect on the climaxing conflict between the merchants/traders of pre-colonial South-East Asia Island Chryse and the Datus and Sultans [rulers] of the said island.
Naomi, a sixteen-year old girl, was one day transported to pre-colonial South-east asian sland Chryse to find herself in a middle of an economic dispute between two rising powers of 17th century Chryse: the traders from other country and the native rulers lead by Datu Surayman. She was transported to a village up north where Tuti is located. Soon, the locals discover her existence despite her efforts of hiding her identity. The local babaylans [priests and priestesses] instructed her to deliver a boy, with a very familiar name, Tuti, to the main kingdom in order to end a dangerous affair looming over Chryse’s main state.
Genre. “Lord, Deliver” is categorized under the genres Adventure, Historical, Fantasy. It is still unknown if it should be categorized mainly for boys[shounen for manga terms] or “for girls”[shoujou for manga terms].
Profile for Lord Deliver Character no. 1
Naomi.
Basic Information.
Name: Naomi
Age:16
Race: Human Race
Birthdate: December 25
Blood Tyoe:
Height: 5’ 1’’
Beliefs and Religion: Unknown
Hobby: Making Chocolates
Nationaliy: Unknown.
Socio Economic level as a Child: Average
Socio Economic level as an Adult: Rich
Hometown: Unknown
Current Residence: On the Road.
Income: N/a…. I think she blackmails a few for money [Laugh]
Talent/Skills: Water-controlling Skills, Beating an RPG Game in less than 90 minutes for the first time, Chocolate Making skill, Ability to remember something Historically Significant [or something written in History books]
Birth Order: Only Child
Siblings: only child. Dammit.
Spouse: none
Children: none
Grandparents: none
Grandchild: none
Lover: err…. I’m not really sure…
Best Friend: Matsu
Physical Characteristics and Attitude.
Weight: Unknown. But someone said, she looks heavier than she looks,
and was thus, lost forever.
Eye color: Green
Hair Color: Black
Glasses: Sometimes. But is not really necessary.
Skin Color: Fair
Shape of face: v-shaped
Distinguishing features: short-height, slanted eyes
Dressing/Clothing: Black Sailor Uniform, on an Average day though, you can see her in 50’s clothes.
Mannerism: not applicable
Habits: none
Strength: Stronger than she looks
Disabilities: None
Educational Background: History self-study, Kindergaten, Nursery, Grade School, High-School
Intelligence level: History-sense is genius. Average for other subjects
Mental Illnesses: none
Character’s short term goal in life: Go to college, finish studies, Deliver Tuti
Character’s Long term goals in life: Money-aspiration
Likes: Cooperation, Fame, Money, Chocolate, Tuti, History Classes,
History books, BL Movies, amnga, RPG Games, cultures, Historical twists
Dislikes: Colonialism, Inferiority to someone else, unfinished jobs, math teachers, F-grade
Fears: Tuti
Admires: Tuti
Occupation: Student, Deliverer
Favorite Food: Chocolate
Least Favorite: Mushrooms
Most Prized Possession: none
Vernacular: none
Psychological Cpndition: normal
Character Behavior: Extremely Haughty,Short-tempered, Superiority Complex
Positive Qualities: Calm, Cunning,
Respectable, Logical, Faithful, Goal-oriented
Negative Qualities: Plain-looking, easily angered
How does the character see herself: Normal, Average, Respected, Logical
How does the character believe she is perceived: Same as above
How self-confident is your character: over self-confident, but she actually proves she’s definitely what she thinks she is
Ruled by emotion or logic: logic
What would embarrass her? None
Introvert or Extrovert?: Introvert
How to deal with anger: Get extremely angry then scares other people away
With sadness: stargazing
With conflict: fighting
Change: due to historical exposure: none
Loss: due to historical exposure: none
Motivation: Tuti, Jobs, Rewards
Happiness: Finished jobs, history
Judgmental: extremely
Generous or stingy: generous
Polite or rude: rude
Likes to eat?: no
Loved: yes
Hated: yes
Other forms: no
Criminal: no
School: yes
Curse: every use of water ability, she loses a bit of her permanent body part.
Vices: none
Theme song: Undecided
Evil or good: good, I guess
Friendly or Mean: Mean… most days.
Favorite color: lilac
Flower: lilac
Power type: water
Strong?: yes
Respected: yes
Feared: yes
Famous: yes, eventually
Rival: Zelim
Killed anyone: Yes
Weapon of choice: sword
Involvement in Story.
Role: Main Character, Deliverer
Scene of First Appearance: first chapter, confronting a teacher
Scene of Last Appearance: I don’t really know…
ABOUT NAOMI:
Naomi lives a normal life like everyone else, except that she's more attractive to women than boys, is an advocate of gay love and thus is not interested in normal love at all [except for one guy: A bald, glasses-wearing, 45 year old business man], excels in History Class, president of the History Club [with two members, one inactive], extremely feared in school and exempted in almost all rules, and controls water in all phases.
One ordinary day, while she was made a wrong step on the way upstairs to her classroom, life made a counterclockwise turn and she found herself falling from the sky into a weird marsh of fluffy greens. Soon enough, she discovers that a little wrong step and a little fall transported her to an ancient civilization of the orient and is tasked to deliver a child of 10, Tuti, to the main Kingdom to be crowned as the prince, written in History Text Books as the Prince of the Most successful period of reign in the East.
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Art Received:
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A freebie from Kenichi Seiji or Keni who is such a wonderful artist, he gave her to for free!~ [glomp!]
L.E. Death offered me an Art Trade! I got four Naomi pictures! Yaay~
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Mitsuki_Amakura: It's wonderful, I like it soo much~ whee Thank you~
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Lanayru302108: Lanayru-sama~ It was an awesome morning gift.. Thank You!
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City Chase: Thanks for the Art trade~
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foxyboy_chan: was sooo wonderful he didn't have to draw me ['cause of the rules] but she still did!! <3
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i ladyUchiha: pmed me with a wonderful message, an art!! Nothing beats that!
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Tierre`Serenity: Is one of the most awesomest artists out there... Naomi looks so uber cool!
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z3lyn: Oh my god, my middle name is selyn... XD and Naomi looks so powerful in the pic~ I loove it!
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Wasil: made an extremely good jjob f drawing a free art of naomi~ She looks so in-character, I LOVE IT SO MUCH~
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x_RyuChan the goddess draw me arts.
I fave this one out of all of these art. Isn't she an amazing artist?:
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Hangul made a lovely Naomi: blushing! I love it~
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Katanarose is just pure love. I can't draw her oc but she did mine.... I'm so ashamed of me right now... T.T THANK YOU SOO MUCH, kATANAROSE~~
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My ultimate love[but I love Vail moar] who, apparently, loves me soo much too gave me wonderful art. Dammit~ She's really great, isn't she? I demand you all to bow down to her.
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Another goddess did my Naomi. EyptPsycho....here we have [another] top favorite. Like Epic favorite. EPIC. [dies of awesomeness]
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Akahime-san tipped me with the msot wonderful tip one can get: AN ART~ <3 Let's all bow down to her greatness, once again:
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EGYPTPSYCHO'S AWESOMENESS:
