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Fantasy Kandiscope (ReWrite) Revision2
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Song :: Fantasy Kandiscope
Lyrics :: (Original) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0tYsXUspqNc&feature=youtu.be
Disc :: "The AfterBreak - The Lords" (Ending Theme)
Poem :: https://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=438343742849023

Note:: This rewrite focused on Syncing up with the melody... And Was 20% more based on the Poem.


Through The scent lingers,
Flowers scattered away.
It Wouldn't-
even allow-
me to wander...


out in their,
pure bloom.

It once Thought me;
"Living for sakes
its a painful sin"

We can't be parted (be parted)
and I can't be away from you.

These feelings, that I hold;
they only make my heart excited

and their scent;
once, scattered away.

I can't wander (can't wander)
yet I came back (came back)
And so, I take a step back

It's so pure, It's dependable(^);
yet so weak, it can't be depend on.

The nightmare (this nightmare)
Carefully play (carefully plays)
all around me (vv)


You; who knows weakness.
Forgive the desire of those;
who seek out on to using it.

That one instant moment;
where it bloomed beautifuly.

It might be to late to know;
But it is something that I must find out.

Once the scent,
and the flowers,
scattered away.

I want to chilishly (childishly)
entrust in you (trust in you)
Each and one of my memories.

I can't forgive,
you in this kindness.
Nor my wish
to monopolize.

The selfish love (selfish love)
that can't be compared (be compared)
one another


One day,
the flowers,
and their scent,
scattered away.

And these feelings (these feelings)
That spread away (spread away)
into one fragmental piece.

And you, Oh,
beloved heart;
be grief
yet be strong.

Like the merciless (merciless)
and yet sweet (yet sweet)
just like before....


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