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smoothbloo12321
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twilight
ok so i was re reading twilight and i have to say, it was an ok book but to me the are some MAJOR flaws!!but before you read i would like to state that these are my fellings so do not get offened please and for my friend violet who loves twilight please don't be mad im sorry thank you. ok here they are:

1.Girls as young as elementary school are reading this. It’s giving them damaging ideas of what they should be—helpless, hopeless, dependent.
and i feel like they are all ready being forced into bleveling that since all there major role model are Disney princesses who sit and wait for some one to save them.

2.THESAURUS ABUSE! Fancy words are not necessarily better words

3.If you’re going to build things up for an epic battle, actually have an epic battle.
and also,Bella didn’t sacrifice anything to earn that cheesy happy ending.
(on the same note:I read somewhere that the reason there wasn’t one was because Meyer couldn’t bear to let any of her characters die. Good writers go where the story takes them, even if that means sacrificing some of their creations.)

ok i don't mean to offend anyone because if truth be said the books are addicting, and i have and can read it agin but i did have some majors flaw that i would like to point out




 
 
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