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Poems and... Everything else i guess.
i love to write poetry. i'm not very good at it yet, but it's still fun. laugh if u want, comment if u want, i know i really suck at poetry. oh well! ^_^ if u ever have any poetry that u want to show me send in a pm and i'll post in here and tell who
the darkness creeps
the floor now creaks
all is silent once more
demons rise
and begin to fight
for what they own and belong
angels fall
from heaven's sky
white light across the land
a bloody battle
the demons cry out
"please, no more we understand!"
they seep into the floor
the angels to rise
all is normal again

woot! this one turned out kinda good. not really. oh well. anyways it'a about a person in a house who falls asleep ((that's where the house and darkness come in)) the person has a dream of anels and demons fighting of course. ((that's where the land comes in)). anyways when it says that the demons seep into the floor ((of the house)) it means the dream is slowly fading away ((returning to reality, the room)) then when it says "all is normal again" it means the person woke up.

kinda cool, huh? the explanation is for the people who didn't know what the poem was about. anyways ttyl ppls! byes! ((comment or whatever.))






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clayfer
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commentCommented on: Wed May 02, 2007 @ 02:23am
i like it one of the only things i understud


commentCommented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 08:17pm
i like CHOACLATE MILK mrgreen



bobbow08
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commentCommented on: Sun May 06, 2007 @ 05:24am
whoa bobbow08, that's alittle random. xd


commentCommented on: Mon May 28, 2007 @ 08:35am
from "one" to "another"....be carful what you read, write and think...you of all people ninja



MusicalMacy
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 02:45am
ur right jazziemc. me be careful......... i hopes. sweatdrop


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