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A poem...
The rain falls endlessly from a pitch black sky.
The sky images my heart,
And how much torment is inside of it.

My soul yearns for yours,
My body for yours.

Do you feel the same way?
No, you couldn't have.
You left me to drown in my own tears.
Tears that I shed for you...

Must this torment in my heart last forever?
Or, will you come back to me?

No, your life has ended,
As mine will some day.

Until then,
I shall cry until I can not cry anymore.
I shall breathe until I can't breathe anymore.

But, even though my life may end...
I will never forget you,
Or your smile...


Just for the record, I wrote this poem at random. I haven't written one in a while, so, I don't care if it sucks. I really don't. Leave a comment if you wish. I don't care. So as you please in here, comment what you want, nobody does that anyway, so, whatever.






User Comments: [3]
Seyaka
Community Member





Wed May 02, 2007 @ 02:53am


It's good. I like it. And I'm not sure if such great literature would be made at random...you must've been inspired.


missladyzoe
Community Member





Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 11:05pm


IT IS SO......
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Mael Sither
Community Member





Sat Jun 28, 2008 @ 03:54am


Lol very well written.


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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