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Poems and... Everything else i guess.
i love to write poetry. i'm not very good at it yet, but it's still fun. laugh if u want, comment if u want, i know i really suck at poetry. oh well! ^_^ if u ever have any poetry that u want to show me send in a pm and i'll post in here and tell who
The Little Girls Dream
silent day,
not a sound,
the rain fell to the ground,
all was quiet in the streets,
no sounds of birds in the trees,
the rain fell harder,
the sun went down,
all twas quiet in the town,
unbearable quiet in the streets,
a rainy day,
as normal as can be,
but that all changed one fateful day,
as the little girl was swept away,
the last thing she saw was the window pane,
then everything began to change,
she closed her eyes and counted to three,
and woke up under a tree,
she ran to her house and looked back at the tree,
then asked herself was it all just a dream?






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clayfer
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 31, 2007 @ 02:56am
good but ending has been done so many times


commentCommented on: Sat Mar 31, 2007 @ 03:11am
yeah i know. but only so many things can rhym together. mrgreen "orange+dorange" see my point........ nothing rhyms with orange! ah my brain! gonk *babble and drool*



Lirimaer
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clayfer
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 31, 2007 @ 04:17am
lol right sure and its not all about rhyming


commentCommented on: Sat Mar 31, 2007 @ 03:44pm
true. 4laugh as i said i suck at poetry rofl heart



Lirimaer
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