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My Journal to Pwn You. I write everything and anything in here now. Screw LJ. :P


Jreken
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My Tears of Blood.
Im crying crying crying my tears of blood.
Flooding this world about me.
Crying as my last dying breath
forms the words "I love you" on my lips.
Staring into this crimson pool
I watch as my reflection ripples.
Im crying crying crying
tears of blood for you.
You've been lying lying lying
all the time.
Im sitting here waiting
but you dont come back
You left me alon
abandonded and crying crying crying
my tears of blood are gathering
and forming a pool of crimson
and its leaking through to you
but you just leave me alone
Im crying crying crying
my tears of blood for you
Come home to me darling
I want to hug you one last time.
Im crying crying crying
all over the floor.
Im watching the mirrors on the doors
waiting for you to come home.
Dinner's cold on the stove
and im still crying crying crying
tears of blood for you.




Jreken wrote bad poetry. He's going seriously goth. ;.;
Anyhow, he wanted some comments on his bad poetry, alot of people said it was sad and depressing, but would be great hard rock lyrics. xd



Its now Sunday the 20th
And I found out my Aunt Carol has died. Both her kidneys and her liver shut down and she took on about 40lbs of water. She died while my grandma was halfway there. My Aunt Carol was my grandma's sister. I found out she will be cremated and spread on the plains of nebraska I think.

Just figured it was something worth putting into my journal.






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Alzzy
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comment Commented on: Mon Apr 11, 2005 @ 06:37pm
*applauds* very good!
I miss my jreken fun xd
I'm really sorry about your aunt


comment Commented on: Fri May 20, 2005 @ 01:39pm
Well, it's certainly better than my poetry. surprised

And I like the vivid imagry. Hehe.
Rock lyrics eh?
More like a rock ballad. Mm.



Andante Orangewinters
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Jreken
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comment Commented on: Sun Jun 05, 2005 @ 04:03am
I dont know.
Its not too good, im thinking i'll rewrite it soon, along with a new journal entry. Even though im supposed to be on "vacation"... *winks*

I dunno. Been a while. =)


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